topauly | Blake Academy

Paul Blake commented on the doc How Do Media Inflence Beliefs of People? 1 year ago

(-5 structure)
95/100

If your thesis is that most governments try to control the media, you should sum up your points in the conclusion. You give very strong examples and reasons!
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, and supported by your source materials and conclusion. You have many of your own thoughts (which is really…[Read more]
Paul Blake commented on the doc Why Finland become an education leader in the world 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc Why do some artists become icons of pop culture？-13021405 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What is a cultural norm? describe the concept in relation to your community. 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc Why do some artists become icons of pop culture? 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What is a cultural norm? Describe the concept in relation to your community.-13021320 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What is a cultural norm? 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What cultural identities are common in your community?-13021266 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What Cultural Identities Are Common in Your Community? 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What Cultural Identities are Common in Your Community -13021416 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc What Cultural Identities are Common among China? 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc The Common Cultural Identities in China-13021406 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc Privileges of Chinese Culture 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc People Feel Secluded from the Community because of Different Beliefs 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc How Some Artists Become Icons of Pop Culture 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc how does media influence belief 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc How do the media influence your beliefs?13021116 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc How do the media influence your beliefs?-13021326 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc How do the media influence your beliefs?-13021283 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Paul Blake commented on the doc How do the media influence your beliefs?-13021275 1 year ago

(-5 structure, -5 grammar/logic)
(90/100)
Make sure you review how to source material here: http://www.baenglish.com/avoiding-plagiarism/
When you present make sure that your thesis is clear, provided in the introduction and supported by your source materials and conclusion. Good work!
Load More

@topauly

baenglish.com